| Course | PA 602 PA Prof Prac Seminar IV |
|---|---|
| Week | 4 |
| Paper type | Disclosure conversation script |
| Length | About 680 words, 5 pages |
| Format | APA 7 student paper |
| School | Chamberlain University |
| Program | Master of Physician Assistant Studies (MPAS) |
| Updated | October 2026 |
Free sample paper for PA 602 Week 4
Correction Conversation Draft for N.B.: The Missed Over-Read Said in the First Sentence, Four Ways N.B. Might Answer, What Is Not Known Yet and Annotations Under Each Turn
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Chamberlain University
PA 602: PA Prof Prac Seminar IV
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Month Day, Year
Correction Conversation Draft for N.B.: The Missed Over-Read Said in the First Sentence, Four Ways N.B. Might Answer, What Is Not Known Yet and Annotations Under Each Turn
The Room, Specified
Setting: the clinic's consult room, not an exam room, on the afternoon N.B. returned with five weeks of wrist pain and a repeat X-ray showing a scaphoid waist fracture. Present: the supervising physician, Dr. Ames, who leads; me, the PA student, who was present at the review of the case; and N.B. Phones are silenced. Time booked: thirty minutes. N.B. was asked whether anyone should join and said no.
The Fact Goes First
Dr. Ames: "N.B., I need to tell you something about your first visit. The X-rays from March were looked at again by a radiologist on the Monday after, and the radiologist saw a possible break in the scaphoid bone. That report should have reached you that week, and it did not. I'm sorry."
Annotation: the fact comes before any context. No sentence explains the clinic's routing system first. "Should have reached you, and it did not" names our failure without hiding behind "there was a delay."
Write the Other Person
Version 1, anger. N.B.: "Five weeks. I've been lifting glassware with a broken wrist for five weeks?"
Dr. Ames: "Yes. That's exactly what happened, and you're right to be angry. Can I tell you what we know about what it means for your wrist?"
Version 2, silence. N.B. says nothing for several seconds.
Dr. Ames waits, then: "That's a lot to hear. Take your time. I'm not going anywhere."
Version 3, self-blame. N.B.: "I should have come back sooner. They said one to two weeks."
Dr. Ames: "You followed the advice you were given. The report that would have changed that advice was ours to pass on."
Version 4, a practical question. N.B.: "So what happens now?"
Dr. Ames: "We've already spoken to the hand surgeon. Let me show you what the X-ray shows today and what the choices are."
Annotation: writing four versions forces the draft to plan for reactions other than calm acceptance. In a focus group study, patients wanted to know what happened, why, how the consequences would be handled and how recurrence would be prevented, and wanted an apology (Gallagher et al., 2003).
What Is Known
Dr. Ames: "Here's what we know. The radiologist's report arrived Monday morning in the inbox of the clinician who saw you, who wasn't working again until Thursday. On Thursday a voicemail was left asking you to call, and the message was marked as done. Nobody called again. That's on us."
Annotation: the explanation describes the system and avoids blaming an individual by name.
What Is Not Known Yet
Dr. Ames: "What we don't know yet is whether the delay has changed how this will heal. The hand surgeon will see you Thursday and may want an MRI or a CT scan. Some of these fractures heal in a cast even after a delay; some need surgery. I can't tell you which yet, and I won't guess."
Annotation: the limits of current knowledge are stated plainly. The draft avoids a reassurance that could later prove false.
What We Are Doing
Dr. Ames: "We have changed how these reports are handled starting this week. Any report that changes the reading at the visit now goes to a shared inbox the lead nurse checks every morning, not just to one person. And I will call you myself after your surgeon visit."
Annotations, Underneath
Throughout, the clinician's turns are short. "Unfortunately," "miscommunication" and "regrettable" are left out. The apology is said once early and once at the close, with the subject "I" and "we," never "mistakes were made." The conversation ends with a named next contact and a phone number.
References
Gallagher, T. H., Waterman, A. D., Ebers, A. G., Fraser, V. J., & Levinson, W. (2003). Patients' and physicians' attitudes regarding the disclosure of medical errors. JAMA, 289(8), 1001-1007. https://doi.org/10.1001/jama.289.8.1001
PA 602 Week 4 instructions, in plain terms
The fourth week asks for a drafted conversation in which a clinician tells a patient about an error or a missed result. The clinician's turns should be short, and the first one must carry the fact before any explanation surrounds it. Write the patient's turns too, in several plausible versions, since a draft with only a calm patient has prepared for nothing. Specify the room, who is present and how much time is booked. Say what is known, what is not known yet and what is being done. Avoid euphemism and passive phrasing that hides who did what. Annotations underneath each part should explain the wording choices. A source on what patients want after errors helps justify the structure, and the draft should end with a named next contact.
Inside the PA 602 Week 4 example
The draft opens with the setting: a consult room, Dr. Ames leading, the student present, thirty minutes booked and N.B.'s choice about who joins. The first turn states that the March X-rays were re-read on the Monday, showed a possible scaphoid fracture and should have reached N.B. that week, followed by an apology. Four versions of N.B.'s answer follow, from anger and silence to self-blame and a practical question, each with a reply, and Gallagher et al. (2003) frames what patients want. A section explains the absent clinician's inbox and the single voicemail. Another states plainly that the effect of the delay on healing is unknown until the hand surgeon's review. A section describes the new shared inbox and promises a call. The final annotation lists the words avoided and the repeated apology.
Where the points sit in the PA 602 Week 4 rubric
Grades for this conversation draft hinge on the opening. A draft that spends its first turns on context, system complexity or reassurance before the fact loses the most. Next comes a draft that writes only the clinician, or only a calm patient, since the week tests preparation for real reactions. Faculty deduct for euphemisms and passive constructions that hide responsibility. Credit goes to a specified room, people and time, to a clear account of what is known and not known and to a concrete description of what is being done. Annotations under each part are graded as evidence of deliberate wording. Ending with a named next contact earns a smaller share. A cited source on patient needs after errors, in APA form, completes the rubric.
PA 602 Week 4 help from the desk
Drafts most often go wrong by circling the fact for several turns, explaining how complicated clinic systems are before saying what happened. Another weakness is a patient who only nods. A third is reassurance about recovery that nobody can yet promise. If your scenario involves a different error, such as a medication given in the wrong dose or a delayed biopsy result, send the facts and who will be in the room; a draft written for you would put the fact in the first turn, write several versions of the patient's response, say what is known and unknown, describe the change being made and annotate each wording choice. If your course uses a disclosure model such as CANDOR, its steps would be followed and named.
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PA 602 Week 4 questions, answered
How long should the drafted conversation run?
Short. A correction taking many turns to reach its point is usually avoiding it, and finished examples run about a page of dialogue with the annotations under it. Where your section sets a length, fill it with the patient's replies and the answers to them rather than with more opening, since that half is the one most drafts leave thin.
Is this the same as the apology work later in the term?
No, and keeping them apart matters. A correction tells somebody that what they were told before is wrong and gives them the current version, and plenty of corrections carry no apology at all. The later week takes a written apology that already exists and works on its wording. One is spoken and forward-looking, the other is a document under review.
Can the draft include what the clinician is thinking?
Only where your instructions ask for it, and then in a separate column or a note, never inside a turn. Interior commentary dropped into speech makes the dialogue unusable as dialogue, which is the point of the format. Most sections would rather see the thinking in the annotations underneath, tied to the particular line it explains.
Where can I find a free PA 602 Week 4 sample paper?
A complete PA 602 Week 4 disclosure conversation draft about an uncommunicated radiology report, with four patient responses and annotations, is on this page.
Why does the PA 602 Week 4 sample write four versions of the patient's reply?
A draft prepared only for a calm patient fails when the real reply is anger, silence or self-blame, so each version gets its own planned response.