NR 305 Week 8 Documentation Practice Reflection Example

One Sentence After the Dropdown: A Reflection on What Changed in My Assessment Documentation

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College of Nursing, Chamberlain University

NR 305: Health Assessment for the Practicing RN

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Month Day, Year

One Sentence After the Dropdown: A Reflection on What Changed in My Assessment Documentation

What Did Not Change

I have assessed patients on a medical unit for eleven years, and this course did not teach me to assess. I listened to lungs, looked at skin and asked about pain the same way in the eighth week as in the first. Claiming otherwise would be performance. What changed is smaller and more specific: what I write down after I assess, and in particular whether the findings that give an assessment its meaning reach a record that someone else can read.

The Habit Before

My documentation habit before the course was built around the flowsheet. I clicked the dropdowns, which are quick and complete in the sense that every field is filled, and I wrote narrative notes only for events: a fall, a rapid response, a change in condition that required a call. Findings that did not fit a dropdown, such as a patient who needed an extra pillow to breathe, a wound that looked better than yesterday or a family's worry about confusion at night, traveled by voice at shift report. The next nurse usually heard them. Anyone reading the chart later did not see them. I did not think of this as a gap, because the handoff worked and the flowsheet was complete.

The Moment That Exposed It

The gap became visible in the first week, when I wrote a discussion post about a man with heart failure whose crackles I had charted accurately while leaving out that he had slept upright on an extra pillow and woken breathless at 0300. Writing it out for the post, I realized that my documentation kept the objective finding and lost the story that told a reader what the finding meant. Crackles alone could have been a new pneumonia or fluid; the pillow and the night waking pointed to fluid. The second exposure came in the fifth week, writing up a head-to-toe examination for the course template, which required me to state the technique before each finding and to write out normal findings rather than summarizing them. It was slow, and it made me notice how much of my own charting says within normal limits without saying what was actually examined.

Reading a study that examined nursing documentation in intensive care units made the point concrete. Collins et al. (2013) found that the frequency of optional nursing documentation, such as comments and extra vital signs beyond what was required, was associated with patient mortality, a pattern the authors interpreted as nurses documenting more when they were worried. The study was observational and did not show that documentation itself changes outcomes, but it suggested that what nurses choose to write, beyond the required fields, carries clinical information that other readers could use.

The Change, in the Record

The change is one sentence. After I complete the flowsheet for a system where something is different from the last assessment, I add one sentence to the assessment note that says what is different and what the patient reported about it. For the man with heart failure, it would have read: new crackles right base, partly clearing with cough; reports waking at 0300 short of breath, now sleeping on two pillows. That sentence takes about twenty seconds. It uses the distinction between subjective and objective findings that health assessment texts teach, reporting what the patient said alongside what I observed (Jarvis & Eckhardt, 2024), and it records a change rather than a state, which is what the next reader most needs to know.

I have kept this habit for five weeks. I checked by reviewing my own notes for one shift each week: in the first week of the habit I wrote the sentence for four of seven changed findings, and in the most recent week for all six. A colleague could check it by reading my notes, which is the point.

What the Course Assignments Added

Two other assignments shaped the habit. Writing the health history in the second week, in which every entry had to be attributed to the person because nothing had yet been examined, made me notice how often my notes blend what a patient told me with what I found, so that a reader cannot tell which is which. My one sentence now keeps them apart: the finding first, then reports followed by the patient's words. The concept map in the fourth week, organized by functional health patterns rather than body systems, taught me to look for findings that connect, such as poor sleep and reduced activity, and my notes now occasionally record a connection when I see one, which the flowsheet has no way to hold.

The case study analysis in the sixth week added one more item. Analyzing a man whose urinary retention was precipitated by over-the-counter medications he did not think to mention, I realized that my admission notes rarely record what I asked and the patient denied. A history that says no over-the-counter medications is only useful if the reader knows the question was asked. I now write asked about sleep aids and cold products; denies, when that is what happened.

Who Benefits

The people who benefit are the readers who were not at the bedside: the night nurse who takes over after a long day, the hospitalist reviewing the chart before rounds, the rapid response nurse called at 0300, and anyone reviewing a case later. Bickley et al. (2021) describe the clinical record as a tool for communicating findings and reasoning to others, not only for storing them, and my old habit served the handoff while failing the record. The patient benefits indirectly, because a change that is written down is more likely to be noticed by the second and third people who read it.

What Remains Difficult

The difficulty is the busy shift. On a day with six patients and an admission, the twenty seconds per changed finding add up, and I am not certain I will keep writing the sentence on those days, which are the days it matters most. I have started writing it right after each assessment instead of saving notes for the last hour, which helps, but I have not solved the problem, and I suspect the real solution is a field in the flowsheet for what changed since the last assessment, which is a request I plan to take to our documentation committee.

References

Bickley, L. S., Szilagyi, P. G., Hoffman, R. M., & Soriano, R. P. (2021). Bates' guide to physical examination and history taking (13th ed.). Wolters Kluwer.

Collins, S. A., Cato, K., Albers, D., Scott, K., Stetson, P. D., Bakken, S., & Vawdrey, D. K. (2013). Relationship between nursing documentation and patients' mortality. American Journal of Critical Care, 22(4), 306-313. https://doi.org/10.4037/ajcc2013426

Jarvis, C., & Eckhardt, A. (2024). Physical examination and health assessment (9th ed.). Elsevier.